Rushed story right from the start: "I did a goblin killing quest, now lets travel to meet the demon lord again, interacting practically nothing with any locals anywhere" For instance something like this: "After three days, I reached the next town, where I found an inn, bathed, slept, and left the next morning." Just streched over a. The author is rather bad at describing the world, and yet wastes time telling about events where nothing happens, the MC interacts with noone, and the timeframe is just white noice.
Pointless exposition, and half baked world building. There are several points to why, so i'll just list what I remember:
Well, as of chapter 7, this is a resoundingly sub-par novel.
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